AlyssaKyle

Hello there! And welcome to YWS! This poem has some real gems in it, but there were also a few spots that gave me some trouble. "With eyes not of ...

Hello there! I must say, I really enjoyed this poem. I was a little worried when I saw how it was set up, but the flow was perfect. The rhyming ...

Hello there! You have quite the interesting poem here. I love the first line especially, and then in the next, I want to know who this girl is. Is she ...

How do you always have so many reviews when I get around to your stories? Oh yeah, becuase your writing is awsome, that's why! I think it is fine that ...

Hey there! And welcome to YWS! Wow. I really liked this poem. I wish I could have been able to write that well when I was twelve! The theme of ...

Hello there! Hey, your friends has the same name as me : ) When I saw the description, I thought it was about suffrage and all that-just goes to show ...

Hey there Kris! I really liked this poem. I love how you weren't afraid to play with the rhyme scheme by throwing in the parenthesis. You certainly tackled the mindset ...

Hello there! And welcome to YWS! Okay, to the reviewing part of today's program. Unless the wind has a specific religion, you might want to change 'gentile' to 'gentle'. : ...

Hello there! Okay, so let's get to that review, shall we? To start, I'm sorry, but I didn't read the above post. My apologies if I repeat something. First off, ...

Hello there! How are you today? Okay, to the review. I'm not sure whether you specifically set it up this way or not, but if you didn't, please throw in ...

Hello there! And welcome to YWS! I have to say, this is one of the best free-form poems I have read. Its length appeared daunting at first, but as soon ...

Hello there! And welcome to YWS! Hmm, this was a very interesting piece. At some points it felt as if the narrator was speaking to their child and at other ...

Hello again! Okay, to the review. I liked the depth you gave your characters, even in this short piece. You added life to the story (ie No talking girl). I ...

Hi there! Well, I feel a little odd reviewing this now. It was posted a long time ago and there have but several reviews already, but I read it, so ...

Hello Again! I didn't read any of the above revews, so my apologies if I repeat something. I thought this poem was nice. The rhyme scheme was good. It didn't ...