AlyssaB506

I like it!

Well done!

I love the amount of emotion behind each and every word in this poem. I believe it is well written and I hope you continue posting pieces of your work ...

Technically, this is chapter three of my book. I understand the confusion. Thank you for your helpful review!

Thank you for your review and encouragement. That was very helpful

Thank you very much! I am very grateful to have you review my work. Also, there is no need to worry, this is not a full chapter. Actually, it is ...

This poem is very intriguing to readers. Since you added descriptive details, your readers are given the opportunity to visualize your poem. I hope you continue to write like this. ...

I must say, this is amazing. You capture your readers by the amazing descriptions, allowing your readers to visualize what you have said. Although, I believe it could be a ...

I love how descriptive you were. Your writing has a certain sophistication and ability to intrigue your readers. I truly believe you have a talent!

As many others have said, your poem is very effective, and I happened to enjoy it. To me, it doesn't matter how long a poem is, as long as it ...

I love how descriptive your poem is. Great job!

This poem is very intriguing to readers. Since you added descriptive details, your readers are given the opportunity to visualize your poem. I hope you continue to write like this. ...

Overall, the plot of this story is nice, but I agree with the previous comment about spelling and grammatical errors. I wish you luck editing!

Thank you for your help. I will be sure to make the changes!