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Alvarin

Alvarin

  • Poetry » General, General Re: You loved me broken.

    Hello ^^ Alvarin here for a quick review. First of all I have to say that I love the imagery. the long curling red waves of my hair, pooling in ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Our education system - GCSE

    Hey! Alvarin here to rant review. As a future teacher, I have to say that I'm quite happy that I'll work in Sweden. I don't understand how anyone could have ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: End of the road

    Here I am again. Said I'd peek around, didn't I? I loved the imagery you showed here, comparing here to a doe, describing her pupils as black holes.. It's very ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This Business

    Hey! Alvarin here for a short review. I found this piece really cute. Adorable, in fact. It describes the pink clouds and rainbows of being in love really nicely, and ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Four (II)

    Yo! Here I am again ;) First of all, stop saying that it's bad when it's freaking brilliant. Believe in your writing, woman. Seriously. I like it (surprise, surprise), and ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Oblivion.

    Yo! Alvarin here for a quick review ^^ First of all, I have to say that you have a really interesting story here, which indeed to a very unexpected turn. ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Four (I)

    Yo, again :3 The beginning kind of reminded me of Love Never Dies, so I kind of sang it with that melody.. I don't know if that was intentional xD ...

    Apr 28, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Fantasy Re: A Wrinkle in Time literary critical essay

    Yo! Alv here to review. First of all, I think this essay is really nicely structured. You have the thesis question(s) at the beginning, making it clear to the reader ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Narrative Re: Wuthering Heights and Frankenstein Comparative Analysis Essay.

    Yo! Alvarin here to review :) I recently had to write quite a similar essay for school, so I thought it might be interesting to read and review this. I'm ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: Mistress of the Faerie Lands

    Yo! Alvarin here to give you a quick review. A typical sign for a good poem is me having to look up words in the dictionary. It means I find ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Children

    Yo! Alvarin here for a review. I'm not an expert on poetry, but I really like this. As simple as it might be in form, it does have quite a ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Lyrical Re: Having a cold...

    Yo! Alvarin here for a quick (short) review. I think everyone can relate to that poem, and I get anxious just from reading it. It describes all the aspects of ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Three (II)

    Yo :3 (again) I love Hedril and Devin far more than I should.. And now I kind of really want Hedril to kill Sandor, but never mind what I think, ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Maiden Fair of Underneath

    Yo :3 I really like it (surprise surprise). I think it flows well and it paints a picture and tells a story and all that good stuff. I like the ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: Chapter One

    Told you I was going to review it ;) I really like this :3 The descriptions of the characters, the objects and the environment is spot on as always. Really ...

    Feb 4, 2014


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