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Not bad. Sounds like a pretty neat rocker song. Or whatever genre it is. Rated PG

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So funny. I enjoyed it. The ending didn't really match to me but I cant really hear the music in my head.

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Le Gasp! What ever is going to happen!? Darn you Matt and your Cliff hangers! ULTRA dodges ABHOR's attack but flies into a pole and dr o ps to the ...

I enjoyed it. Easy to understand and reads with ease. I agree it needs a bit more emotion. Light and Dark is like the oldest conflict on earth, so your ...

Creepy. Love the ending, very surprising and even more creepy. You made good use of a short amount of Space and had a very good impact. Well done.

Cant let the Familia have no crits. The first part made me giggle. The rest of it confused me. This is like no help to you but I have not ...

Thanks, I edited it. It's an urban fantasy. I wont really be posting much more on it. I'm still working on book number 2. Be on the look out for ...

I agree, the last line threw me. It was pretty funny. I know exactly what your talking about :)

It was very pleasent. You kept a rythm, which many song writers lack sometimes. I didn't really draw much from it personally though. It's probably just me though.

:thud: Dont hate me, you know the smileys cool. I appreciate you rating all this and adding a warning in your titles.

erm....I'm not much for rap or profanity so this didn't really do much for me. Just my personal preference.