Alteran

That because there is no oxygen or air , there is consequentially no medium for the voice to exist. That should be that's or that is and you needed a ...

Intrigued. I saw 2 mistakes. Little typos. Caroline sat back and put her over the gun, "capable of unspeakable evil." You missed a word in there. A news reported stood ...

OMG, I absolutley agree with Rieda. This was brilliant. I mean truely top notch writing. I feel like I felt what the characters feel. I'm a little sad about it ...

Sad. Very very sad. Good descriptions of a disater. I kinda thought Kyle recoverd kinda fast too but I think with a disaster your adrenaline pumps and you would recover ...

You didn't think i would let this slip by did you? Although she no longer stared in wonder, like the first few times, she still followed the sculpture d with ...

Sometimes, you do unexplainable things. That’s the excuse I give for why I actually went to the haunted house invitation. The house stood on a lonely hill, its gaze looking ...

Tea sat up dazed, she then realized this wasn’t her room. She lay in a vast four-poster bed with curtains. She looked under the warm covers and saw she was ...

This is kinda of odd. I liked it but I didn't like where it is. I kinda dont understand why this is in this place. It's like a character sketch ...

The black clothing and the bags no doubt arouse the suspicion of the supervisor conveniently stood behind the counter , his gaze in their direction. Pythias continued to look at ...

Well I critted this last night but my mom flipped out cause i was up so late so i'll try again. Hopefully i'll get it all done this time. The ...

The room reverberated with noise and lights shone from glittering lamps. A voice spoke out from a man who walked out into the ring, instantly everyone fell silent. “We will ...

Considering the last week, Ajax found it reasonable to drink two glasses of undiluted wine and smoke three cigarettes for his breakfast. The long day ahead seemed less scary when ...

It was very nice there, yet so hot. I was wearing a sun hat made of straw with an excessively large downturned brim, shades, a blue bikini top, walking shorts, ...

           The Titan is at full air capacity?” he pressed.           “Yes, sir!” The dock master assured him. Needs a quotation mark there.                  �

"All spirits are enslaved which serve things evil." -- Percy Bysshe Shelley, Prometheus Unbound . Love the quote. Deep down, like everything, beauty is mechanical. There is nothing spontaneous about ...