AlmondEyes

it wus good.but you had alot of errors and i wuz confused on a few things. and plus what hppnd to the other version you had? i like that one ...

dude you seriously had me fooled! i though you were about to spill some deep dark secret and all it wuz wuz you eating a donut! i busted out laughing ...

i can tell you right now ur poem is one of the best poems i've read all day, and wat you said about luv iz true. one thing that makes ...

ur poem wuz random and i liked it. keep writing!

i agree with ignatius u had me pretty confused on a couple of things in ur poem, but keep writing!

i agree with ignatius, that wuz disturbing. i thought the 1st stanza wuz funny, but the others kinda made me wanna take a shower.

ur poem wuz good,but it needs more

ur poem wuz really crazy. i thought it wuz really good. keep writing girl!

u thnk it's a good 1st try, but you could still use some wrk

ur poem wuz good and i hope u write more!

srry i meant to say really good

wow i tthought ur poem wuz really god and hope to read more!

i thought ur poem colud use a little more description, but it was good and i will give you my props. keep writing

i read your poem and it made me smile. wether that was your intent or not i don't know, but keep writing.

i read your poem and thought it was pretty good. i also hope you gat a chance to read my poem when i submit it.