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Re: Dark Secrets chapter 1
it wus good.but you had alot of errors and i wuz confused on a few things. and plus what hppnd to the other version you had? i like that one ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Confessions
dude you seriously had me fooled! i though you were about to spill some deep dark secret and all it wuz wuz you eating a donut! i busted out laughing ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: love?
i can tell you right now ur poem is one of the best poems i've read all day, and wat you said about luv iz true. one thing that makes ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Random
ur poem wuz random and i liked it. keep writing!
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Raindrops
i agree with ignatius u had me pretty confused on a couple of things in ur poem, but keep writing!
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Just the way I like it
i agree with ignatius, that wuz disturbing. i thought the 1st stanza wuz funny, but the others kinda made me wanna take a shower.
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Echoes
ur poem wuz good,but it needs more
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Dancing with the devil
ur poem wuz really crazy. i thought it wuz really good. keep writing girl!
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: XXX
u thnk it's a good 1st try, but you could still use some wrk
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: I was there
ur poem wuz good and i hope u write more!
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: The Hunter's Night
srry i meant to say really good
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: The Hunter's Night
wow i tthought ur poem wuz really god and hope to read more!
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Notice me, then love.
i thought ur poem colud use a little more description, but it was good and i will give you my props. keep writing
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Angry
i read your poem and it made me smile. wether that was your intent or not i don't know, but keep writing.
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Run Away
i read your poem and thought it was pretty good. i also hope you gat a chance to read my poem when i submit it.
May 31, 2011