AlmondEyes

My, my,my. Quite the poem. "A circle of luscious emerald pasture, Full of dancing magic and whispered dreams. Beyond the stone symbol of peace-- The hidden forest of tranquility." I ...

I agree with gummiebaers. It was u=interesting enough, but the misspelled words and grammar take away form it. With me, grammar, spelling, and correct punctuation are very important. It drives ...

I agree with gummiebaers. It was u=interesting enough, but the misspelled words and grammar take away form it. With me, grammar, spelling, and correct punctuation are very important. It drives ...

I've gotta give you your kudos on this poem. I loved it!! "Fireflies hover like stars That haven’t quite finished falling And dance over streaks of brightness in her hair ...

First thing i liked about this poem is that you didn't rhyme. There were other things i really liked about this poem. "Your eyes are tortured and you ask me ...

Sorry about that. Ok, first thing's first... when i clicked on this i thought it was a story, so that brought me up short, but i did like the poem. ...

I think you did a great job with this poem. I usaully hate poems that rhyme, but this was good. the flow was nice and. i do agree with what ...

Wow! I love your play of words in this "The honey melts into my ears, flowing down my throat in a sweet, serene vibration." Sounds yummy!! "Beautiful words, words which ...

WOW. i read this and i had to put my hand over my mouth. He dipped my pink hands into his metal crotch, unfolded his wires and released his gears. ...

Gliding slow and fast. Staying; forever may you last. Spraying the sky gray. Falling onto the world. Covering it with a frosted glass pane. Giving me a glass bead curtain. ...

I must say i thought this poe was quite delightfully violent and filled with gore. I absolutely loved it!!! Teeth fall from one's mouth. Blood oozes from appearing sores. i ...

wow, i'm usally not one for rhyming poems, but this was pretty good. Life is a game, played by all Winners, losers, big and small i think you're right about ...

first of all, i just wanna sayi really liked your poem. it was sweet and very beautiful, and i'm not gonna just point out all of your mistakes. Our love ...

Whoa man!!! this story was freaking crazy!!!! i absolutely loved it!! Finally satisfied with the knots, the guard nods to a slave boy who hands him a long whip and ...

i like the feel of this poem and flow is totally perfect. your rhyming is spot on and i think was a really good read. I will not beg my ...