AliceFairfield

Scary! There's tension in this story alright...If "red wine" was your prompt, you wrote this really well. I actually felt scared while reading this. The red wine dripping to the ...

It's good of you to write something based on the fire. That incident should never have happened, but unfortunately, many factories still haven't fixed their appalling safety hazards and policies, ...

"Find something that can help you and others too." That's the best advice I've heard in a while. And like you said, girls aren't made of sugar and spice, at ...

Goodbyes take a while. Some take forever. I won't tell you to move on or be happy, since a loved one's death isn't something that can be forgotten any time ...

This poem is painful to read, in a good way. The speaker's despair and emotional agony are clearly conveyed. I found the line "what is man that he should break ...

What a beautiful world your world is.^^ I like the strong nature-related imagery you've used throughout the work. I especially like the second-to-last stanza, where you compare the coming and ...

This is a really good poem. The "blood-spattered graffiti" and the "story of a people failed" lines really bring out the poor state of the "rebels." Indeed, blood stained artwork ...

Darkness within the speaker in this poem is being strangled by her own dreams and her unwillingness to see them through? That is a common problem among people nowadays (nods). ...

This is beautifully written...And it's just as the speaker's in love with a drowned woman? And this poem doesn't adhere to a certain rhyming or stanza structure, correct? This is ...

At least Sofia has one friend in the house...Her mother doesn't seem to be loving, though since this the first chapter, I guess it's too soon to say. The only ...

Cute...I'm sorry. This was an enchanting intro, especially the prophecy. Everything about this preview felt so mysterious. The kingdom of cats is really, really a topic I'd love to explore ...

Oh, so is Jefferson the child with the prosthetic limb? Chris and Rachel really are kind children. I'm liking them more already.^^ And they're right. Everyone deserves a chance to ...

This is fun to read! A lame statement, I know...But it's hard to find works that are actually fun to read sometimes. I love the concept of "invisible" kids, really ...

Oh my. I've never drunk vodka before, but it sounds like an interesting experience. There are some grammatical errors throughout the poem, but I get the feeling they fit the ...

This was a very positive read.^^ Was this work meant to be a children's story? It is certainly good enough to educate young kids on how to appreciate themselves more. ...