Alice

Soft rock I think, I'm not really sure, I don't know how to play any insturment so I'll be asking for help with it. But most likely soft rock.

I agree with suez, which is why I've stopped posting my poetry *nods*

I don't believe that this is a poem or a story at all, simply a misplaced plea for help. I suggest having a Mod move it to randomness.

I added some more detail to the end! Just to let you people know!

Thanks guys! I'm going to be turning this in for part of my Narritive Essay in my english class so any constrctive critisim is much appreciated!

Kinda like "Paint your Wagon"? if she had both it would probably be something like that, except they'd be attacking each other all the time.

I think that would only work if you knew on a personal level hun.

But Bella always knew who she was going to choose, I mean she wanted Jacob but she wasn't about to leave Edward.

Oh and I just remembered, sometime in October Stephenie Meyer is coming out with a new book called Breaking Dawn, what happens after Eclipse.

I love Jacob, and Edward, and Jasper....You have to love all those guys don't you? Stephenie Meyer spent a lot of time developing those characters, and not enough time on ...

No...just no....way too lil kidish...and that reaks of hurt part of my soul (the part that lives and breathes Stephenie Meyer lor) like really bad. Shame on you!

Its more confusing to read now....how did you get it like that?

it supposed to look like that? Makes it a tad bit confusing to read. Interesting poem though.

The perfect guy ever Edward+Jasper+Emmet+Jacob. The end of Eclipse is quite depressing isn't it? I love the whole concept of two amazing guys falling for one ordinary girl. We determined ...

>.< I cave I need to write and short stories will make me survive until NaNoWriMo starts ^.^