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I say poetry should originate in the verbal arts because that's how poetry was created ^^ Originally poetry was written only to be read aloud by the author or orator ...

Hey Mack! Thanks for your comments! I will explain what you picked up on and why I chose that now. First, meat. Yes, I meant meat because I was being ...

Oh my god congratulations on your third star! That's huge! So you're right about the emotional content all being in the first and second line. The third line is a ...

I decided against any end punctuations because haiku are a moment, not a complete ended thing. Thank you so much for the thoughtful interpretation!!

Thank you so much for your review. I really find that you're spot on in your analysis of it.

Happy to do it! Thanks for the review.

Hey EagleFly! Yew is a type of wood, or in this case a type of tree just like an oak, but a different variety! What I mean by feather-fall is ...

If its your goal to write a poem about the complexity of AI, then try writing it with examples of events. Show us the story of the AI who helps ...

So was it just a metaphor and not literal like I took it?

XD You think I'm just being paranoid? I think you're an anxious individual. Apologies, however, aren%u2019t always helpful%u2014and sometimes they can be excessive. This behavior may stem from anxiety

Well every time I read one of your reviews where you're apologizing upfront, it makes me think you're trying to take liberties with polite behavior. It doesn't really come off ...

Oh nice, I'm glad to see you're not apologizing for feedback this time XD So "black bites" is actually the light getting turned off and the sudden darkness "biting" those ...

it was #1

Thanks for the review. I really appreciate hearing that someone understands what I was going for, and that the message resounded with you.

XD I can always count on you to point out the silly little things I forget.