Aley

Hey joallover, I was wandering around YWS and I found your poem so I figured I'd give you a review. When I read the poem, I took notes on things ...

Wiki says "forearm guard" is a more common term for vambrance. Hello Fort, I think your writing is really clean. You don't have typos I noticed or things that need ...

Mm, this is a sad poem. There are so many things that this is akin to: depression, anxiety, paranoia, mental differences, even just learning something new. I think it's really ...

Hello Just Perks, I'm really happy to see you're writing poetry, and that you're not feeling stuck to line caps or end punctuation! That's always a breath of relief at ...

Hello again! So I'm here to review this installment of Salvation of Ignorance. Because I've reviewed your work before and I made comments about your writing style and what it ...

Hello rawrafied, I'm Aley and I'll be reviewing your style today. Seeing as I haven't read the story, I won't comment on plot or character, but I think I can ...

Hello Machupicchu14, Welcome to YWS, and I'm glad to have another poet on board. There are a few things I'd like to introduce you to just because you are one ...

"to be gazing into the eyes of one another in such a manner." What manner? Why not just say the manner in which they gaze? Why are you being shady ...

Hey ThisisLegacy, This poem is SO much clearer than "Attack" with what it's talking about. Like, I'm still not 100% on all of the details, but the meaning behind the ...

Hey Thisislegacy, I think to answer your questions, I'll have to break down what I like and what I don't like. To begin with, I really like the flow of ...

Hey Sheyren! First off I have to say that I think this is a really interesting way to write a book. I like the idea and your execution is pretty ...

Hello MJTucker, I've seen you around for other christian related things on YWS so I was curious to see how your writing was when I saw this in the Green ...

Hey Nymeria, I have to say I enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing it! I'm going to be reviewing you today with the Critiquing Sandwich and if you don't ...

Hey NathanRaux, First off, I'm glad you've been sticking around. It's nice to see you've been here for almost month already. It looks like you just missed out on Review ...

Hey Sagarisiyal27, First off, Welcome to YWS! I'm glad you joined us and decided to post! If you haven't gotten a chance yet, check out the welcome forum and tell ...