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Hello quratulainanjum, If we look at poetry in an objective standpoint, we look at things such as imagery, theme, structure, originality, and entertainment value. In terms of those things, I ...

Hello whatchamacallit, Overall, I'm not really a fan of reading about apocalyptic stuff because I think there are too many things that can be overlooked when talking about the fatigue ...

Hey AneiDoru, As you know I've already skimmed what you've got of the story but now it's time for a better read-through and let's start out with this. I like ...

Hey Lumos, I am here to review your story and I'm going to do that just by giving you my reading notes since you have the questions at the bottom. ...

Hello DarkPandemonium, I'm real happy that whenever I googled a word it was the difference between British English and American English, so I don't have much for you in terms ...

Hello jamgalloway, I'm here to review Ch. 35! I'm really excited to see that you've gotten so far in a novel, but I'm really confused how you've done it without ...

Overall your writing is a little jarring, but nothing out of the ordinary. I think you've gotten a little wordy over the years so I've put those together to the ...

Hey Royal Highness I actually really love the academic voice in this piece. You did a really good job making it present, but not overbearing. I think you're also a ...

Hey dcrno, I like that you're using very visual images in this poem. It helps the reader really see what you're talking about and even feel the cold since you ...

Hello AneiDoru, I'm here to review as promised! I think the story does a good job describing emotions. I like how you add colors and images whenever you're describing them, ...

Hello ajruby12, I like how your story develops and the characters in it. They're unique and you have a rich culture in this story which hleps create a better sense ...

Hey Gymnast2801, I'm really happy to see fanfiction on YWS! I mean, honestly, I love to write it myself and there are so many ways to improve when you're writing ...

Hello writerforfreedom23, So since you're like, brand new to the site, I'm going to review in the typical YWS Critique Sandwich which should give you a good feel for how ...

Hey LadyLizzLovelace, I'm not sure if I've reviewed your poetry before but I think I have. I know you're probably going to be fine with what I have to say ...

Hello Iridescence, I'm happy to read some of your poetry! You've got a good way with words here. The way you put this poem together first introducing the setting, then ...