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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: bowing standing flying

    Hey DemonGoddess, I honestly can't remember if I've read your stuff before so I stuck it all in bright red on my spreadsheet so I could finish my req. reviews ...

    Oct 18, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: connotation

    -clears throat- Yeah. I might have ended up at your wall cuz I was reading your reviews because I was going to review your poem. >>; HI ALL! You might ...

    Oct 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: War

    Hey Unidentified, Welcome to YWS! First thing first, I'd like to introduce our review style here since our site is mostly about reviewing! We encourage people to review with a ...

    Oct 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Deleted 87

    What I see in this poem is that it is a poem written to the self about individuality. It is saying, in essence, that because we all come from the ...

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pure Love

    Hey TheBlueCat, I'm happy to say WELCOME TO YWS! You've actually joined during Review Month which is a month where we try to do 50 reviews a piece, welcome! That ...

    Sep 24, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Guide to Showing and Telling

    Hey DarkPandemonium, I really hope you're going to add this to the Writing Resources section. Contact Kyllorac and get them to approve the article and they will send it to ...

    Sep 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: The Vampire

    Hello IvoryRose Overall I think your poem could use some improvements, but we'll get there. First thing first, I enjoyed how you stuck with your theme and you really got ...

    Sep 13, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the circular wall

    Hey Lightsong, I am just going to come out and say it. You missed some edits. There, now that the unpleasantness is out of the way, let's get to the ...

    Sep 13, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Silent Letters

    Hey Empires, I reviewed your last poem and I'm here to review this one too. I feel like you have a good idea here, like, I like that you're working ...

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: my demon

    Hello Neptune, Thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us this RevMo! I'm always really excited to see a new poem to review on YWS and with Review ...

    Sep 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Reflections on the Universe and You

    Hey Empires, So I'm here to review your poem and happy recent YWSaversary! The poem is good with how much description you give of the events going on and how ...

    Sep 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Deleted 84

    Hello Lumi, let me see if I can brush off my lit analysis gloves. -Dons gloves-Cracks hands- The poem "rigor mortis" by Lumi Lumiton heavily relied upon the title to ...

    Sep 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: here's to

    Hey dude, So I'm doing a new way of poetry reviewing just because it's revmo and I figured i'd try it out. I'm ranking based on the Poetry Wars categories, ...

    Sep 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: No choice.

    Hello whatchamacallit, Nice to see you again! I think it's been less than a day since I reviewed something of yours. Welcome to RevMo XD So in this review, I'm ...

    Sep 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sippy Cup

    Hello graphiteshimmer, So I'm going to give you a little different review on this poem and I'm just going to review based on the criteria I usually use to judge ...

    Sep 6, 2017


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