Aley

Hi SnazzyPencil, Not really sure what to think about this one. I think some aspects of this poem are really good, but you fall flat on other areas. I like ...

Hey RadiantShadow! Aley here to review your poem. I really like how you're taking just a sequence of time and putting it into a poem. That really helps bring this ...

Hey Ruro, I think this is a good start. I have to disagree with you, I think it needs less interrupting thoughts. It needs to be more monologue oriented in ...

Hey Sophia146, This is Aley, and I'm here to review your poem. First off I'd like to say that I really love the tone you used in this poem. It's ...

Hey Morrigan, So I'm really sort of torn about this poem because I hate the name, but I think it's really cute. The problem I have with the name is ...

Hello cmullin! I'm very familiar with "My Papa's Waltz" so I was drawn to this poem because of your description. First, I'd like to say that I think you did ...

Hello Mundane14, Welcome to Young Writers Society. I'm Aley and I'm here to review your work. This review will have what I liked, what I didn't like, why I didn't ...

Hello DarkPirate101! Welcome to Young Writers Society. I'm Aley and I'm here to give you a review. This review will go over what I liked, what I didn't like, and ...

Hi Nickjay, I'm afraid I am not going to be quite as raving about your poem as Tammi. I do think, also, that you did a good job with your ...

Morrigan! Hello~ I'm here to review your piece. I have to say I really like how you use the language in this poem to your advantage. You're really using every ...

Hey TahaT11n, As requested, here's a review from me to you~ First off I want to say that I'm really happy to see that this poem really sounds like it ...

Hey jherrmann, It's nice to see that you're taking an interest in YWS. If you'd like some more information about how this site works, or what the features are that ...

Hey SereneSimpliciT, You're doing a good job with the language you're choosing to employ for the novel. I think you've got a good understanding of your system of naming and ...

Hey SoVirgoMaleke, Nice to meet you. I'm here to review your writing. First off, I got to say way to start a unique fantasy. Creating a separate world full of ...

OH MY GOD! You will never BELIEVE what I found in the Green Room. ONE OF YOURS! AND it doesn't have ANY reviews, can you believe that? Seriously! There is ...