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Hey Armisael, Okay, so first of all, I'm not exactly sure if these should be read as one poem or three, but considering they're all posted together, I'm going to ...

Hey Kaos, so here's my critique on this poem we talked about forever ago. I think the thing I like the most about it is the flow of words and ...

Hello GusG! I am really happy with how smooth this reads. You have a great grasp of grammar and I'm really impressed with the use of punctuation and variety of ...

Hello Akelia Taske, I was really excited to see a fanfiction poem on YWS. I tend to read fanfiction more than original fiction, so I was excited to see what ...

Hey Herbgirl, First and foremost I want to say that I love that you are exploring line breaks. This poem has a really great tone to it because of that, ...

Hey RippleGylf, I love this. Okay, I love it XD Actually it got my like a while ago, but it's still in the green room so I'm going to go ...

Hey Mwgoza97, First of all, Welcome to YWS! I'm really glad to see we have a new talented poet in our midst. It's nice to see. I'd like to agree ...

Mea~ I'm a huge poetry fan, so I'm here for this! I think having it start with "Here" way over in Maine is great, and the overall shape is very ...

Hello TheDarkWriter! First off, I'm going to drop this here just in case you've not had a chance to look in the wonderful, amazing, most information packed place on YWS, ...

Hey CandyWizard! I like this message. You're using a very structured format, and taking all of the critiques that are typical here on YWS and giving the reader something to ...

Hey clogs! Welcome welcome welcome welcome! I really love that you're one of us now >D Okay, enough dilly dallying. I THINK... hm, what do I think about this. I ...

Hello dramamine! I'm glad our favorite motion sickness pill is still writing

Hello Divergent Demigod! I'm your friendly neighborhood reviewer, and I'm here to review this poem! First off, I am just going to say that I don't know if this is ...

Hello Ehtaniel! I'm trying to get June out before the end of Review Day, sorry >

Hey Sylar! I actually really like that this is more of a paragraph poem, though I'm not so sure it was on purpose. I like the way that you're using ...