Alex2322

Hello Noelle, I have never read the hunger games, but so far this is great. I have never been a true fan of fan fiction due to people just pretty ...

The sun was in the sky, Calix, and Even had just got done finishing up their lunch. It was a beautiful day, sun shining through the window lighting up the ...

Being into vampire stories, yours is well written. The description and details are just amazing. It was long which i love that, im a huge reader. Not many people go ...

Pretty good so far, it's well written ill give you that. Also you did pretty good with the description, and details. The emotions were well placed. The thing that got ...

Well Written, personally i loved it! kept the poetry feeling through the whole poem which is hard to see from some people who write poetry. That was a strong poem ...

Really Relate-able, i love work that i can really relate myself to. I would have to agree with a few comments, I was captured before i finished the first paragraph. ...

Beautiful, Well written. Also you did well on transmitting the emotions from the poem. It's like i felt the emotions the way it was written with. Really good poem, you ...

All I can say is Beautiful, and greatly written

Pretty good so far. Not many things i can say except it kind of messed with my mind towards the end when you cut it off into little lines, other ...

Really Interesting chapter. Good detail, and well written. Although i do have to agree with Twinkle4ever on the (should be 'in the middle of' other than that really good. can't ...

To start off, The first chapter seems awesome! reminds me of a book i read in school about slaves and this kind of stuff. Very detailed which i like in ...