Alchemist

YO! No more patterns. So, I know Robert had a breakdown, but he doesn't really seem to have changed all too much. Well, I think it's an usual reaction, but ...

Hello! I'm here for both "Adopt a novel" and a Review day review! :) (this again)(I'm still trying to be fun, huh?) This chapter is cool! Just the structure you ...

OMG Hello! I'm here for both "Adopt a novel" and a Review day review! :) automated message how do I do it? Hey, one thing I never pointed out is ...

Hello! I'm here for both "Adopt a novel" and a Review day review! :) (this is a copy pasted introduction, right.) Hey, this isn't a good thing to start a ...

Heyah! Hello! I'm here for both "Adopt a novel" and a Review day review! :) So, the pattern of him thinking about Stephen is becoming a bit too much I ...

Hello! I'm here for both "Adopt a novel" and a Review day review! :) So, this was a good chapter overal. Style is good, plot is as good as always, ...

Hello! I'm back for an "Adopt a novel" review! This is an interesting chapter that fortifies his interaction with Stephen. Well, there is something, even if Rober is not really ...

Heya, me again! Cat turning into a cowboy, and racoon into a girl? Why you no follow the reader's expectation? Joke, I like it this way. Werevolf seems like a ...

Heya! Here for the quick review. Once again, using the numbering in a story is really unusual but it suits your flash-fiction style. I think your MC is not even ...

Hello, I'm here to do the review for you! I like it how you managed make a solid worldbuilding in only a few sentences. And it is all written in ...

Heya Rosey! I'm here to do some reviews(NO WAY)! This is a revised story, right? Ok, let me go on. Concerning your style, it is really catchy, and it is ...

Heya Silveryyy awesomeness! I'm finally here. Your main 'villian' is pretty cool. He is a strong, ruthless ruler, who knows what he wants and what's he doing. I'm actually not ...

Heya! Finally back (though I will review the rest when the r-day is here!). As usual, stylishly this is great. Well, If you read my reviews, you know what I'm ...

Hey! Back here for 'Adopt a novel' review! First of all, the 1 part is awesome. I also love the 'seiging force' you used, don't think aurora was right on ...

Hey! I'm finally back to review your work, for "Adopt a novel" review! Quick nitpick! You are making a punctuation mistake, when closing them, like this ". ,where it should ...