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AkuRashomon

I used corruption because I trusted you.

  • Poetry » Humor, Health Re: gasoline killed me

    Thanks for the kind review and I like your story Everything into Nothing. I might review that when you are done working on the plot.

    May 14, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Life

    good to know you're okay^^

    May 14, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Life

    You're welcome. I love to encourage people to write more. And your question, umm, life is treating me very well. How about you?

    May 13, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Only if...

    You're welcome!

    May 13, 2023
  • Poetry » Theatre, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Theater

    You are very welcome!

    May 13, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: The Watcher

    You're welcome!

    May 11, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Thank You

    oh, that's okay because it's good. I am okay. You're welcome! Your poem's really good c:

    May 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: on the rooftop

    Yeah, who knows what's gonna happen next? I wish a fabulous day/night too c:

    May 11, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Mothers

    I am very happy this is in the literary spotlight. You deserve it @LemonySquid

    May 10, 2023
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Will Love You for the Rest of My Life [bonus]

    Thank you slr

    May 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Humor, Health Re: gasoline killed me

    Thank you for reminding me I had a typo. I will keep writing as well! Good day!

    Apr 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Humor, Health Re: gasoline killed me

    Yes I will fix it. I made the cover myself hehe. I am very thankful you liked it it.

    Apr 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Humor, Health Re: gasoline killed me

    Thank you for your kind review! I will fix and improve my writing skills as well:)

    Apr 1, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Friend

    Thank you for your review!

    Jan 21, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Friend

    Thank you!

    Jan 19, 2023


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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