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Re: The AI war
Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a little comment/review for your very interesting and well-written short story. Anyways, let's get into it. I have ...
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Re: Is this a good start to my story?
Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am give a quick comment/review. Anyways, let's get into it. This plot is very interesting. I always like plots that are related ...
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Re: Soldier's Remorse
Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I am to give a comment/review for your poem that caught my eye in the green room. Anyways, let's get into it. I feel ...
Jan 6, 2023 -
Re: No one will know and No one will care
Hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a comment/review. Anyways, let's get into it. I love how you use simple words that were put together to ...
Jan 6, 2023 -
Re: May’s story
Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a quick comment/review. I really like it when you separate you story's parts into chapters. I love the ...
Jan 5, 2023 -
Re: A poem I wrote about Life and Death
Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a quick comment/review about your poem. I scrolled and scrolled in the green room and I didn't find anything ...
Jan 5, 2023 -
Re: portrait of a shapeshifter
Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a little comment/review about this beautiful poem of yours. Anyways, let's get to it. I've never imagined shapeshifters ...
Jan 5, 2023 -
Re: Behind the trees
Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am just goning to drop a quick comment/review. This story is very interesting. I like how Samantha's past was like dark and ...
Jan 4, 2023 -
Re: The story of Lisa, the burning fire girl
Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am going to give a comment/review. This is one of the first long stories I've read from you and it is pretty good ...
Jan 4, 2023 -
Re: The Dark Truth E.1
Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a comment/review. I'm not really interested with horror stories but this one is pretty good and has potential. I ...
Jan 4, 2023 -
Re: Missing Puzzle Pieces and Synthetic Identity
Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am going give a quick comment/review. Wow, I love the sad boy/girl vibes the poem is giving. When I was younger than now, ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: moving past the talking stage
Hello there. This is Ina. I'm gonna give a quick comment/review. I love how I can imagine a lot of stuff while reading throughout the poem. I feel like it's ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: Confines Of Ghosts
Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I like jow it could give off mysterious and strange vibes but still answers to the questions at the same time like what the ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: Wonderland
Hello, hi there. This is Ina speaking. Anysways let's get to the poem. Wow, what a nice starting. I liked how it made me feel really calm and it made ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: Eric is Dead
Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I like how it can be a bit mysterious and dark. But also, sad because of her brother and maybe the other Eric whom ...
Dec 26, 2022
