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AkuRashomon

I used corruption because I trusted you.

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The AI war

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a little comment/review for your very interesting and well-written short story. Anyways, let's get into it. I have ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Is this a good start to my story?

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am give a quick comment/review. Anyways, let's get into it. This plot is very interesting. I always like plots that are related ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Soldier's Remorse

    Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I am to give a comment/review for your poem that caught my eye in the green room. Anyways, let's get into it. I feel ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: No one will know and No one will care

    Hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a comment/review. Anyways, let's get into it. I love how you use simple words that were put together to ...

    Jan 6, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: May’s story

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a quick comment/review. I really like it when you separate you story's parts into chapters. I love the ...

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A poem I wrote about Life and Death

    Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a quick comment/review about your poem. I scrolled and scrolled in the green room and I didn't find anything ...

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: portrait of a shapeshifter

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a little comment/review about this beautiful poem of yours. Anyways, let's get to it. I've never imagined shapeshifters ...

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Behind the trees

    Hi, hello there! This is Ina speaking. I am just goning to drop a quick comment/review. This story is very interesting. I like how Samantha's past was like dark and ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The story of Lisa, the burning fire girl

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am going to give a comment/review. This is one of the first long stories I've read from you and it is pretty good ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Dark Truth E.1

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am here to give a comment/review. I'm not really interested with horror stories but this one is pretty good and has potential. I ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Missing Puzzle Pieces and Synthetic Identity

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I am going give a quick comment/review. Wow, I love the sad boy/girl vibes the poem is giving. When I was younger than now, ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: moving past the talking stage

    Hello there. This is Ina. I'm gonna give a quick comment/review. I love how I can imagine a lot of stuff while reading throughout the poem. I feel like it's ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Confines Of Ghosts

    Hi, hello. This is Ina speaking. I like jow it could give off mysterious and strange vibes but still answers to the questions at the same time like what the ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Wonderland

    Hello, hi there. This is Ina speaking. Anysways let's get to the poem. Wow, what a nice starting. I liked how it made me feel really calm and it made ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Eric is Dead

    Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I like how it can be a bit mysterious and dark. But also, sad because of her brother and maybe the other Eric whom ...

    Dec 26, 2022


One by one they went / And, though each laughed as he returned to earth / Their souls were in their eyes.
— Alfred Noyes (Watchers of the Sky)