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Re: Alfstan
Ah, Cedric. That blasted fool. Hey Chichie, it's Akelia. You know what I'm here for! Review will be in Sours and Sweets due to things that you can improve on ...
Jun 2, 2018 -
Re: Jonathan Livingston Seagull
Hello there, Akelia here for a review! First of all, well done on this short, but sweet poem. I liked the symbolism that you portrayed in this work! Now I ...
Jun 1, 2018 -
Re: A Bleeding Dear Thing
Hello there, Akelia here for a review! I do reviews a little differently than others do, the critiques, negative things and stuff you can do better are called 'Sours' and ...
Jun 1, 2018 -
Re: maybe i'll love her
Hello, Akelia here! Time for a review. First off, this work was well written and explained despite it's shortness! Short, sweet, and to the point are always the best. Now ...
Jun 1, 2018 -
Re: Just Take A Deep Breath and Color
Hello! Akelia here for a review! First of all, well done with this work! It can be hard to express your feelings to the world, but you did a great ...
Jun 1, 2018 -
Re: The Runaway Bride
Hello there! Akelia here for a review! To start off, well done on the first chapter! I am anxious to read more of the story. To begin, I do reviews ...
May 31, 2018 -
Re: She’d seemed divine: Genre Villanelle
Hello there! Akelia here for a review! This poem was short, but really packed a powerful punch to reality. I won't say too much here and wait till a bit, ...
May 31, 2018 -
Re: Allow Me a Moment Outside of You
Hello there, Akelia here for a review! Wow...wow. This is probably one of the most beautiful poems I have read here on YWS thus far. I want to express all ...
May 31, 2018 -
Re: Applewood Sky
Hello there! Akelia here for a review! This review will be separated into two parts. In the place of critiquing I am doing "Sour" and "Sweet." The sours are the ...
May 31, 2018 -
Re: The Spectre of Hatchitt Hill
Hello there! Akelia here for a review! First of all, let me say that this was well done! For having been written fast, it was quite entertaining to read, especially ...
May 31, 2018 -
Re: ii
Hey there! Akelia' here for a review! *Pst....pardon and possible typos. First time writing a review on my phone* Anyways! Let me start off by saying that I LOVE this ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: The Blank Page
Hi there! Akelia here for a review! Let me just start off saying, I believe EVERY SINGLE WRITER knows what this is like. Here I am writing this review, while ...
Oct 7, 2017 -
Re: A Quiet Blush
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! So let me just start off saying, I love this story to the fullest. Since I'm homeschooled, I don't have an experience with ...
Oct 7, 2017 -
Re: Pan Gourd, Sun Kind, art Sand Meek (June 11th)
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! Wow...just....wow. There are so many things about this poem I love...oh boy where to begin. Before I start the review, let me just ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Running through Apocalypse
Hey there! Akelia here for a review! I'm not sure if I've reviewed you before, but if this is the first time, awesome! :) So to get started, I'm going ...
Jun 25, 2017
