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Re: Fallen gospel
Good day/afternoon/night to you, dear stranger. I have to say, this is quite a unique poem. What did he do to be punished like that? Did he really deserve to ...
Sep 4 -
Re: If Only You Would Stay
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! It's a wonderful day for a poem isn't it? I love reading poems! Top Graham Cracker - the narrator of ...
Sep 3 -
Re: Places left unmarked
Hmm, please correct me if I'm wrong but this is my interpretation: From the line I always have this invisible man who appears and beats me between my legs, his ...
Aug 29 -
Re: A Day in College
WOW this is great! I can't understand half the word you said (I've Googled it later) but the context clues you gave made me understand them a little. As an ...
Aug 28 -
Re: Tar
Hey, hello, I read it, mainly cuz I need review points (sorry) but also cuz I think everyone deserves a fair chance to be seen and improved. I'm not sure ...
Aug 28 -
Re: Call from Grandma
Woah, I kinda didn't expect that ending but I should've known since normally, no grandparents would put their grandchildren in obvious danger. I like how easy going Annie is. She's ...
Aug 26 -
Re: Harmony is a dream
This poem feels like a fantasy story in a fever dream wrapped in personal struggles. The lines A part of me wants to fly away But I'm chained to the ...
Aug 25 -
Re: Be Human
This made me smile, specially the part that goes Fart in a place no one would judge you, It sounds so silly but somewhat fitting when the theme is all ...
Aug 24 -
Re: THE SEARCH
I like how simple yet full of emotions this is. Specially this part I like to think I am kind. Thoughtful. Attentive. Then a thought arrives that proves I am ...
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