Aedomir

Hey man! You must tell me how you get so many reviews :-)-- Well, grammatically this was more-or-less sound - just a few thoughts: Meranda said and stood up from ...

Alright, firstly, not a bad poem. However I must emphasise how there is little to make it a good one as such, also. I believe even a story the poem ...

Hi jenna! I'm a little tired, but I will have a look through for you :wink: Alright, on to the crit: According to Lord Chesterfield, “You must look into people ...

Hey Eimear, thanks for posting in my review thread, let's see what I can offer: Don’t you often wonder of how those who have been born with the gift of ...

Before I give a crit, YWS does ask that you keep your review:submission ratio at 2:1, that way more people will like you and you will get better reviews. “Hey ...

Hi Icaruss, thanks for posting in my review topic. And the roof is falling apart and the rusty door-knobs are giving me a rash. The excessive number of ‘and’s in ...

Hi man! Since I can't actually read the poem how you set it out, I will separate it to how best I think it should go: I would say: Framed ...

Look at this! Click here! It's another 'spoiler'. I mean, just look at him! Scroll down to the video, and watch it. It is so cheap, he really thinks he ...

Hi Imp! Sorry I took my time getting to this - let's hope my feedback can be of some help. Fleeting melody I feel this should be plural, since you ...

Hiya! I will remain loyal to this thing, because I enjoy it so much :-) Anyway, I have put the grammar and recommendations on line-by-line nitpicks into a Word '03 ...

I haven't read this yet? Woah... please tell me I’m not crazy This seems awkwardly worded. How about 'please don't tell me I'm crazy'. I think it flows better. I ...

Grrr... I see I posted a review on here when I first started... in my dark days. That was very unhelpful I see, so here is my proper version! ^_^ ...

Hey Vernon! I will get to the others soon enough, fear not! Anyway, I thought this was a very intriguing chapter; I am interested in the love affair between Eolen ...

Hi Drifter. YWS does ask you to do at least two reviews per one submission you make, to keep the balance. Firstly, I will ask you to do the spell ...

Hey! Is this yet another story I spy Jared? hiding deer, game Deer meat (venison) counts as game. a natural , [COMMA] born hunter. His heart fluttered and his bow? ...