AdoxagraphyAngelus

I really enjoyed this poem. It made me look at the Fourth of July in a different way. You really gave the reader another aspect to look from. There is ...

I really liked this. :D I mean, I wear short shorts, but they cover everything that need to be covered. Some shorts just don't need to be worn. You put ...

I really liked the topic this article is on. I'm home-schooled, and I have over-the-phone teachers. My mom doesn't teach me, because we'd probably get upset too much, but I ...

I love acrostics, and this one is no exception. It wasn't anything that'll change my life forever, buuut I don't think it was meant to be. It was meant to ...

I really, really like this. I'll go over it stanza by stanza. :) Broken solider says he is letting go Comma Crying, his girlfriend begging no Period He is leaving ...

ZOMG. This is really, really good. :) Why does evil live? And good seem s to die? We are like dust in the wind, It’s just a matter of time ...

I hide behind a fake smile dying inside Hoping you'll see and finally come save me but still I'm alone waiting for the shadows to consume me I hide behind ...

Hm. I'm not sure what I think of this. I mean, I did enjoy reading it, and it does hold something, but it also lacks a few things. :) Sometimes ...

I loved this. :) Love is an illusion, Merely a feeling of confusion. It slowly and silently, Sneaks its way in. I love these first two lines, as well. And ...

All I can say is wow. That was written really well. I don't usually like poetry that doesn't have capitalization but how could I not like this? You put such ...

I really liked this. :) [quote What is it? What is it, That calls out to us? This stanza doesn't really have a hook to it. It doesn't draw the ...

I'm not good at critiquing acrostics, buuut, I really like this. :) You described emotion well, and I really liked this piece. :)

This is sad and happy. I love it. :) I'm really sorry about your friend, by the way. Redemption Here I sit as your last breath has been taken. Gone ...

I adore these! :D The writers block one is PERFECT for how it is to have writers block! XP Awesome job on that. And on the inspiration one, zomg! Are ...

Wow. That was really good. :) Though there were a few small mistakes in there. Look Comma Ma, it's your grandson . . . Hold him tighter Comma momma. Watching ...