Adnamarine

Oops, double post.

Back for more! :) I definitely like the changes you made, especially changing the verse endings to "you would be my only". It's good how you change the endearment from ...

Torn (revised version) If mirrored in one’s face she found the image of the other, the choice would be no simpler. The one—mature, open, attractive. The other— charming, amusing, familiar. ...

Very well then. :D You should use the name. *nods* However you think is what you should go with.

The first thing I noticed is that all your sentences have the same type of structure, at least in the very beginning. It gives it a somewhat bland feel. "That ...

Sachi-cat! Terrific job. First things first: *stars* That said, I'm normally not huge on haiku. I usually read them in bunches like this, but anyway they're all really good. Good ...

You repeat "on." "float on chill wind" "Leaves rest on his grave" Should be very easy to fix. Apart from that... you're an awesome writer:) Good luck!

Thanks everybody! To Mad: I definitely see what you're saying about the second stanza. To be honest, with the first one, I only intended to do the rhyme like this: ...

Hey yoyo:D

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If we could give it ten stars, it would deserve it. Is it possible to overuse the word awesome? I'd sooooo overuse it on you! Loves:) *adna*

That is adorable:) I love it! Meese... now I'll be calling mooses meese for the rest of my days:) lol Eah, who cares about iambic pentimeter? This is great! *stars* ...

Thanks everybody:) Pengu - I love the long review! It was great! Did you figure out who 'they' were by the end? I just want to make sure it's clear ...

I've heard that it's really, really good, but I've never read it myself. Who's it by again?

Just to let you know, I don't think all caps is allowed in the subject. I could be wrong, it might be different since you only did it with one ...