Young Writers Society

Nice job ^^ i wish I could write haikus like that, but everytime I try it, well, it looks more like a machine forcily crammed words into a stanza lol. My favorite stanza in the series was the one about the wolves XD I loved that, but then again wolves are practically my favorite animals lol. Great job on this, make some more!

I love the first two! Also, I really like your use of imagery throughout the pieces.

In the Halloween one and the chill breezes one (numbers four and six), the last lines seem to almost break the spell created by the first two. They seem out of place and out of keeping with the moods- was this intentional?

I feel you've captured autumn nicely, and I especially like the vocabulary you use (equinox, swift harmony, carved faces).

Good job!

Red apples drop where worms infest happily.

Steep corners where witches fly.

Sachi-cat! Terrific job. First things first: *stars*

That said, I'm normally not huge on haiku. I usually read them in bunches like this, but anyway they're all really good. Good luck!!!!!

Banana-san-

Thank you so much for your review!!

Just to clarify (probably just me being dumb Surprised) what is equinox praise?

Symphonies fall from

Branches in swift harmony.

Leaves crunch underfoot.

Trees bare themselves

In equinox praise.

All else beholds the wonder.

Before a full moon,

Wolves express their approval

For nearing events.

Carved faces leer past

Steep corners where witches fly.

There will be candy.

Football soars high as

All dive before its descent.

Victory is sweet.

Chill breezes sweep to

Cover hilltops with gold leaves.

Who took my mittens?

Geese fly overhead,

Running away from autumn.

Many wings will tire quickly.

Pies from oven should

Cool before being touched.

Warm temptation taunts.

Red apples drop where worms infest happily.