Adnamarine

But seriously Andy, have some respect for the dead. I mean, come on! Poor Carmen, whoever she is. I actually loved her internal commentary during that stage of the conversation. ...

I have one question. Is the first part (meaning before the asterisks) meant to be a prologue? If it’s not, it might be best if it were. The style of ...

I liked the beginning very much (the beginning being up the point where she dies, which isn’t technically the beginning, it’s more like the first half, but whatever:)). It was ...

Hey again! Your second review, mademoiselle. The green highlighted stuff was just unnecessary words, typos, etc. that you could pick out for yourself; tiny mistakes, accidents, meh. There is one ...

Hey Maki! Here's your review. I didn’t really understand a whole lot about what was going on here, but I’m not worried yet. It’s the prologue. For now, I’ll just ...

EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate. EPIC WIN! (and I was shouting by the way) Edit: You know what I find interesting? That the part that most people (like me) found ...

Story #1: I like the first line. It grabs the attention. “for me to get a glance at his beautiful face once more” The ‘once more’ doesn’t work for me. ...

--In the first paragraph you have only one sentence which doesn’t begin with ‘she’ or ‘he’. That one sentence has an introductory clause, and then, again, ‘she’. The sentence was ...

We share so many things, You and I: Hatred and fear, pain and angst.

Whoa, there's 7? I've only read two, because I haven't been able to get the 3'rd from the library yet. They're pretty good. I don't gush about them or anything, ...

I say it the same way you do. I like Sabriel better than Lirael, though I still liked her. But for some reason I've never been able to bring myself ...

Check out the cover! It looks amazing! And guess what, the release date is October 7, 2008. I can't wait! Current countdown: 64 days, 3 hours, 41 minutes I'm really ...

The very beginning is absolutely hysterical. Because they act so dramatic , but it's so silly (: "I hardly even know you and you want to whisk me off somewhere?"

Dizzy Dizzy Turpentine

I love poems about poetry, and I liked this very much:) "The Poet ' s hand quivers- With thoughts on edge of pen , The world upon their shoulders- And ...