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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 15
Hello! KatyaElefant here for her last review for you for the day or at least I think this will be my last review of the day. We shall see. Let's ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 14 Part 2
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Ahhh! Rhys trying to confuse the characters again! I adore it when he does that! I absolutely ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 14 Part 1
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here...(I would like to personally congratulate you on your perfect row of red stars. I hope to achieve ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 13
Hello, KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have right here... So I'm kind off confused on where they got the money. Did they just happen to ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 12
Hello, Noelle! I am here with yet another review! Let us see what we have right here... When you started this, I was really confused on who this character was ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 11
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here! This review is going to be more of a series of questions and reviewing over what ...
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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 10
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here! (I found this genius way that I can read and review this at the same time ...
Mar 2, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 9
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what you have written this time in this wonderful novel right here.(I'm jazzing up my intro here :D) She wished ...
Mar 2, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 8
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here! Falyn couldn’t help but feel sad for her friend. Falyn had no choice but the leave everything ...
Mar 2, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 7
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Finally I got to reviewing this story! WOOO! I am so pumped! I need to get back in action and get back into this ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 6
Hello Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have right here! (The character age changes will sure to be interesting.)Oh and sorry if this post is ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 5
Hello KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have right here! The way that your sentences transition isn't very smooth in some cases. You had a lot ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 4
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have here! That first line was just the most cheesy line ever. XD As soon as I read the ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 2
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have here! So I just realized the "moonstar" is a person. This confused me at first because if some ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 1
Hello! KatyaElefant for another review! Let us see what we have here(this introduction is so going to get annoying but you have to DEAL WITH IT). Okay. So usually I ...
Feb 28, 2015
