AdmiralKat

Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... So wait. Akia thinks she has lost her whole family even though in a previous chapter, it ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Is Akia the only person that gets flashbacks or something? I would think that you would ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! I can see that the past Wolfare1 stole my introduction partially... Cure you past Wolfare1! Anyways, let's see what we have right here! ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! I just made a decision! Even when we have the break from the review competition, I will still review 5 reviews everyday of ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have here... That beginning paragraph where Rhys is complaining about not having the locket is strange on Rhys's ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here with yet another review! It's really hard for me to review these chapters because they are really well written, they are short and I'm kind off tired ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I am just wondering if Rhys realizes that if he were to make everybody immortal, the ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's just take a minute and think about all the chapters that I reviewed thus far. That's a lot of chapters and A ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Some of this imagery that is depicted here is amazing. Especially at the beginning, I was fairly ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Oh I like the description on how she had to relax to do magic. That really helps ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! (NO WAY! YOU COULD HAVE NEVER PREDICTED THAT KATYAELEFANT WOULD EVER REVIEW YOUR PIECES!!) Let's see what we have right here...(and what shall ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... So at the beginning it was pretty confusing about who was talking. If you had created ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have right here... Why does everything have to be a secret? Why can't Fayln learn all of this ...

Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let us see what we have right here! When Fayln grabs her father's collar of his shirt(sorry about my silly structure. My excuse ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! I might have a snow day tomorrow or on Thursday so I might be able to review a lot those days but I'm not ...