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Re: .
Hello! AdmiralKat here to drop a short review for this piece of work! Might I ask, what is the point of this work? What message were you trying to convey ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: If
Hey Keepwriting! Lovely to finally get to reviewing one of your works! Let's begin! :D So when I read this through the first time, I'll say that I was mildly ...
Apr 9, 2016 -
Re: Tick Tock
Hello, Tay01, KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... So when I was reading this there was a rhyming pattern! I adore these rhyming patterns! ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Where broken dreams are castles
Hello, Thriver, KatyaElefant here for another review! LEt's see what we have right here... I think that you could split this poem into two stanzas so you could create the ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Glasses
Hello, Meandbooks! KatyaElefant here with another review! Let's see what we have right here I think that this poem is superb. It really is a great poem! It's probably my ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Reality
Hello, Cns! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I think that this poem is a great point of view on reality. It really strains ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Why, oh Why?
Hello, Labrador! Welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying this website! If you need any help, feel free to PM me or reply to this review! Now, let us ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Confessions of the Confused
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... This poem has a really nice theme and many people can relate to this quite easily. ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Our Time
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I think that you could have given a better description of everything in this poem. You ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Why I Write
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! I've been trying to review these with reviews that are pretty long but it's pretty hard to do that because people have already ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Where Were You?
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... First off I wanted to point out a counting error that you made. From the point ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Beauty Is
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! I just wanted to tell you that I'm wondering if this were linked to this country wide competition where you submit art or ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Irene
Hello, KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Some of this poem is really disorganized, I must say. You could have made many aspects a ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: What We Left Behind
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... So I'm a little confused on what this poem is about. I see some love interest ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Future
Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! These reviews are going to be a lot more shorter because I can't seem to think of things that are wrong with these ...
Mar 7, 2015
