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  • Novel / Chapter » Science, Action / Adventure Re: .

    Hello! AdmiralKat here to drop a short review for this piece of work! Might I ask, what is the point of this work? What message were you trying to convey ...

    May 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If

    Hey Keepwriting! Lovely to finally get to reviewing one of your works! Let's begin! :D So when I read this through the first time, I'll say that I was mildly ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Tick Tock

    Hello, Tay01, KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... So when I was reading this there was a rhyming pattern! I adore these rhyming patterns! ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Where broken dreams are castles

    Hello, Thriver, KatyaElefant here for another review! LEt's see what we have right here... I think that you could split this poem into two stanzas so you could create the ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Glasses

    Hello, Meandbooks! KatyaElefant here with another review! Let's see what we have right here I think that this poem is superb. It really is a great poem! It's probably my ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Reality

    Hello, Cns! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I think that this poem is a great point of view on reality. It really strains ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Why, oh Why?

    Hello, Labrador! Welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying this website! If you need any help, feel free to PM me or reply to this review! Now, let us ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Confessions of the Confused

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... This poem has a really nice theme and many people can relate to this quite easily. ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Our Time

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I think that you could have given a better description of everything in this poem. You ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Why I Write

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! I've been trying to review these with reviews that are pretty long but it's pretty hard to do that because people have already ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Where Were You?

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... First off I wanted to point out a counting error that you made. From the point ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Beauty Is

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! I just wanted to tell you that I'm wondering if this were linked to this country wide competition where you submit art or ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Irene

    Hello, KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Some of this poem is really disorganized, I must say. You could have made many aspects a ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What We Left Behind

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... So I'm a little confused on what this poem is about. I see some love interest ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Future

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! These reviews are going to be a lot more shorter because I can't seem to think of things that are wrong with these ...

    Mar 7, 2015


worlds buzz over us like bees, / we be splendid in new bones.
— Lucille Clifton