AdjiFlex

Ha! Well here we have a delicious poem that you probably made to spite a girl you really hate but don't care to stat a street fight with. Anyway you ...

Let me start with something good here. Your first line is brilliant - turning a rule on its side is certainly an intriguing thought. You have chosen a not very ...

Your story, first of all, is written fairly well. You have an appealing writing style and the work has hardly anything to complain about where grammar and syntax are concerned. ...

Ok so I've read through this. Right off the bat, really nice chapter you have here. Your pacing, descriptions and creativity are above average no doubt. Still, you are working ...

Ah, another love poem. Back in poetry class, my lecturer used to tell us that writing poetry about love, death, and such cliche topics is grounds for failure. This might ...

Well wow! So you are bringing a new twist to the heaven/hell/earth tale I see. New twists are good. I like the paradoxical situation of the two new leaders being ...

Here to review this perfectly-lengthed chapter. So the first few paragraphs are dutied to get your readers to know a little about your main characters. They seem like a pretty ...

So this chapter has left my thoughts in that strange middle ground between utter confusion and great intrigue. Then again, as I reflect upon your first line here, the protagonist ...

Wonderful! I am glad I stopped by here. Si I like the instant paradox here where the church people are killing this man cruelly. There are just a few glitches, ...

Hello there. AdjiFlex here to review. So I haven't read any previous or latter chapters of this book, but somehow, this just sound like a good beginning to a great ...

Oh boy, this was a real pleasure to read! I'm glad I chose to review this piece! I haven't read any other chapters (but I surely will in the near ...

Hello there. Here to give this piece its first review. So for a general examination on the piece... It started off in the morning with an alarm clock, gives it ...

I must say, this is an excellent chapter. It was short and grabbing, and now I know that the perspective of the rest of the story will be a compellingly ...

Hey there. You reviewed my story so though I'm a little late, I'm returning the favor. First up, I am a fan of poetry, and there is poetry in much ...

Nice and simple introduction to two characters here (well mainly Jasper of course). It was easy-going and had a kind of natural feel to it. Still, though you've painted a ...