Adeera

hello again!! down to business! I'm gonna have some fun with color if ya' don't mind [color=#BF00BF]W00TN3SS!! [/color] "After a lengthy lecture by Shirley that it no one would pay ...

oohhh ok so when i read this i couldn't decide if i did or didn't like the feeling of sadness and hopelessness it gave me i think i liked it ...

you might find a different way of saying . . . It caresses the page I'm writing on you say it twice right after the other and it's a bit ...

Hello! sorry if this is harsh i honestly don't mean to be. "He didn’t notice a dim, luminous orb of blue light flare from the object. He was already fast ...

OOoohhh i like this a lot! sheesh your really good at this anyway on to the review!! this is really good the flow is great and the words are put ...

once again very nice job I noticed one problem . . . "what is thought is cannot be read." is it suppose to say that?? I LOVE LOVE LOVE the ...

hey !! i thought i would review again 'cause i read it over and so yeah anyway moving on!! it's really good much better than the first draft but the ...

i liked it pretty well i felt like i was on a roller coaster but my only problem was mentioned above at first i was picturing a forest person in ...

this is adorable!! really i loved it. but i must say it's was hard to read in the white. i understand that it's the 'pure angel' effect but i had ...

why do I write this if i don't like to write poems, is that I only write poems when I am in my emotional stage where sadness reigns in me. ...

yeah so this made me laugh it's very clever my only problems are the same ones little princess pointed out so i'm not gonna nitpick but honestly i'm not much ...

Very nice poem :!: I quite enjoyed reading this. The wording you had, the flow, the rhymes, they all just made this poem great :D I really hope to read ...

well girlie here are my thoughts the firsts part was VERY confusing and i think i know why, i do this sometimes too i get really excited about the story ...

wow i liked it a lot it really caught my attention and you described everything so well i could see it all !! one thing that really bothered me (it ...

i think this was beautiful, and i felt like i can relate to it, i liked the line "no-one will get my hearts key" i think mostly the reason i ...