AddictedtoDelusion

Thank you so much ! i edited it a bit to what it was originally and you're right, i forgot about the comma in the last stanza and it doesn't ...

Hey thanks for the insight. The poems about a single beautiful moment that i wanted to capture on camera but wasnt fast enough. So I decided to record it in ...

Thank you, im glad to help! I think you're a great poet.

Hey :) Thank you for your kind words. If you would really like to know, the poem isnt about romance or dreaming, just a single moment where the sun shone ...

This poem is so raw and emotional I really like it. The last word being isolated sounds awkward and makes the reader pause, but I think that it works so ...

Thank you so much for the criticism :) You're right, the quotation marks were redundant and I like how it sounds now, so thank you. xx

Hey! :) Thank you so much for the review. I fixed the ending - to an extent - because I didn't really like how it sounded either. I think the ...

Thank you so much :)

Aw thank you so much, you're so sweet. Thank you for the follow, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem :) x

thank you :) I hate that too x

Aww thank you :) I'm glad you could enjoy it! (and honestly, I think you're quite good at understanding poetry). Have a nice day xx

Thank you so much :) I'm thrilled you could relate to it x

Thank you so much! I tried to play around with tone so I'm happy it wasn't a total failure. The idea behind the contrasting elements was that when it comes ...

Thank you so much for the review :) Honestly, my intent for the strange structure was to make it as disembodied and uncomfortable as the poem itself was in order ...