Abyss

Greetings, I found your poem quite gripping, to the point where I found myself in a stagnant position of suspense. Your style of writing is quite admirable, I have to ...

This poem hold’s within it great power and depth. It’s often the small things in life that come of more value than the larger things. I personally like the way ...

Very interesting poem I must say. Allow me to share with you what I thought of its concept and the way you wrote it. “You’re here And I am too ...

Since the first reviewer corrected your grammar and spelling mistakes, I am going to delve into the depth of this poem. Firstly I would just like to say that, anything ...

Wowzers...both the concept and tone of this story is absolutely brilliant in my opinion ;), although there were a few grammatical errors etc. Copper really is a girl who embraces ...

That is what I would like to call a mini candy bar poem with a touch of darkness. It may look short and choppy on the surface but, I am ...

Hi there! Lets begin shall we. Smiling, you toyed with my heart- Now- like a toy- it’s broken. Don’t pretend you’re sorry, You only deceive yourself. The metaphor you used ...

Hey there! you've just sucessfully depressed me haha its winter down here and I am freezing! Although my abstract form was warmed immensely as I was captured, within the atmosphere ...

hmmm...I love how you personify tainted perfection in this piece, how an angel of glory can be subjected to desolate ruin. This stanza here sort of mystified the poem a ...

This story took me on a journey--a sweet journey--but then led me off a cliff and into an empty river teeming with potential. I feel as though your piece has ...

This poem somehow reminded me of that eccentric young blonde girl in Harry Potter, who speaks to dead people and all. Anyways, I actually read it in her exact voice ...

Mostly profound people never find themselves dwelling inbetween two consider yourself deep:) the poem for me was literally too sweet in trying to express such a 'bitter' logic. Try substituting ...

I'm drawn to love the diabolic elegance of this poem, it truly is gripping through its velvety smooth grasp. although im rather perplexed as to what role the girls had ...

The basic concept was a tad cliche but, the way you brought it across wasn't, so I applaud you for that. If only the king had an opposition other than ...

I like how the first and last stanza links, its great how it opens and closes the poem. Although some parts were a little confusing, like, in one moment 'she' ...