Abigail_W.

Hi Solvery! I know this poem would only rhyme and flow well in Spanish, but do you mind translating it to English, too? I am okay at Spanish -- I ...

Your descriptions are so fresh and brilliant, Blackbird12! Pregnancy itself is often written about (especially how the woman got pregnant), but I think it's fair to say that the actual ...

Howdy Sierra! I see you've followed through with some of my suggestions, and I am thoroughly pleased! He listened to the slow beat of his heart rate monitor, his hands ...

Hiya there! I just have to say, I'd like to see this as some sort of an opinion essay. I mean, there wasn't much to differentiate this "poetry" from any ...

Hiya, TheWriters! First of all, great title -- an excellent way to lure readers in! First of all, I'll just go along and correct some technical things in red. Alex ...

What a thrillingly creepy story! It sort of reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe's, "A Telltale Heart." However, your story didn't have the guilt at the end. I agree, it ...

Hiya there Lakegirls! Oh my, this was sweet. I'll bet this was as sweet as that lemonade. ;) On hot, hot summer mornings, when the sun was so bright it ...

This poem has a very nice flow, and it is excellent considering you were half asleep when you wrote it. Trapped in my world which I despise, Wide awake with ...

Hiya! I'm gonna have to aggre with Mizzle on this one. The punctuation was kind of off. However, this poem is just so cute! "The past that binds me/The lust ...

Hiya Meggwriting, and, as I see you're new, welcome to the Young Writers' Society! I like this, though it could be a bit redundant. I think I'll just go through ...

Hiya Blackbird12! I quite like this ... they come out to play at night. the yellow-eyed Monsters, they hide in my closet as my mind drifts to a plastic world ...

I am a huge fan of poetry, but I don't really know what you mean when you say only avid poets will understand this. I think if anyone digs deep ...

Hiya Sierra! I see you are new, so welcome to the Young Writers' Society! I think I will just go through and edit some things in red and nitpick along ...

I can't think of a thing to correct that sargsauce hasn't already. However, I am confused with the overall purpose of the "poem." A poem criticising poetry? Isn't this a ...

Hiya! Great poem you have here. Eternal life is such a good lie, But in the end, we all must die. The life that is lived, has no better meaning, ...