Abigail_W.

Hi there! This was really impressive to read and I had to take a minute to let it all sink in. The most striking part of this piece is definitely ...

Hi Tenyo, I disagree with the idea that there is too much rhyming in this poem, because I don't think there is a rhyming quota. However, the structure of the ...

Hi Nargles, You have a very good basis for a poem here. However, the feelings you describe are so universal that they could almost be seen as cliche. You might ...

Hi rosereader! I see you joined a couple of weeks ago, so welcome to YWS! You have some nice words put together here, but I think the poem could use ...

Hi there! First of all, I'd like to counter what Misstoria said about proper punctuation and grammar. These are actually not necessary in poetry. e.e. cummings rarely ever used capitalization, ...

Hi Rosie! It's Abigail. This story is stunning and horrifying and hopeless. You have a fabulous piece of work right here. I have some little nitpicks: (by the way, do ...

Hi Rosie! It's Abigail and I'll be reviewing this poem. First of all, I love the way you used synesthesia. Since I can't put that into my own words, I'll ...

Wow, Spyndlethread, this is fantastic! It was absolutely a delight to read. The rhyme scheme was easy and the poem rolled right off the tongue, as it were. This poem ...

Hi Amberchelli! I think this is a beautiful and touching poem. You seems to be very depress. If this poem is ever based from reality, then I am so sorry ...

Spooky! I'm not sure if I agree with carbonCore on their review of the whole plot. As someone who does not personally practice Wicca (but who has friends who does), ...

Hey Jessie! Who's the kid who died a few years ago? This is really nice, and I like how it turned into a lesson about your mother always being right. ...

Please continue this! I found it very intriguing and although it worked very well as a poem, I think it would work even better as a short story or a ...

Hey there! This is a really sweet poem even though I can't exactly relate to it. Usually I'm not too crazy about the AA BB CC etc. rhyme scheme, but ...

Hey TDMitchell! I like your friend's idea, and I like the way this story was executed. Like Chloe suggested, it really does make the reader feel claustrophobic. My favorite aspect ...

Very funny. I don't agree with all of the points here, but it was well executed and hilarious. My only problem is all the different colors. They hurt my eyes! ...