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Re: [Look At] Me
To whom this may concern: HELLO! My name is Jay! :D Lol And well yeah. ... ... for starters I loved it! :D Lol Especially this line: "Sticks and stones ...
May 1, 2013 -
Re: Slut
BLAH! My name is Jay! :D *Bows at imaginary audience* *Waves like a queen at the fake audience* Okay well, what caught my attention was the title of your poem. ...
Apr 10, 2013 -
Re: Perfection Ch1
HELLO! :D My name is JAY! :) *Smiles like an idiot at computer screen* Well first I would like to say, good job. I liked the idea that you've transgressed ...
Apr 9, 2013 -
Re: Cirque de Sin (1st mistake: Entering)
HI! My name is JAY! :D *waves like an oddball at the computer screen* *realizes no ones waving back* *throws computer at wall* *has a nervous breakdown* Okay so to ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: I'm gay (But I cry alone at night)
Finally! Something about the internal struggles of someone being gay! I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it! :D Thanks! I mean it. Lol. I just wanted to get that off my ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Stories of a Garden
HELLO my name is JAY! :D *Smiles weirdly at computer screen* *Realizes no one can see him smiling* (._.) Okay so, let's begin shall we. First I would like to ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: The covered ground of deceased~
Hello darling, my name is Jay! :D Well let's begin this review shall we! :D Ha! Okay Well first Let me begin by saying YEAH YOU WROTE YOUR FIST STORY! ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: The Revenge
HELLO! :D Jay Here! :D ACTIVATE UNICORN POWERS! Lol. Okay so like, I like the basis of the topic that you've placed these characters in this situation. However... don't hate ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Just Like Everyday
HELLO! My name is JAY! :D ACTIVATE UNICORN POWERS! :P Well, well, well... I have to say I enjoyed this poem, I don't really know why but I did. There ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: A Cute Animal
BLAH! It's me Jay! :D ACTIVATE UNICORN POWERS! I Loved This! There that's all I have to say. :D OMJesus! I was laughing' almost until I died! And then I ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: When skies ignite in beauty
HELLO, my name is JAY! :D I Love this poem! :D I think that it was beautifully written because it was short and precise and you got really to the ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: The Pain That Feels So Good
HELLO! :D My name is Jay and, I absolutely love the topic of your story! I am a weird person and I love, love, LOVE stories that deal with mental ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Bloodlust
Okay, so yeah... I am a weird person. And being this way, I am drawn to stories like this one. I am drawn to stories about druggies, mental disorders, and ...
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: Catfish
I think you are an amazing writer when it comes to imagery, I love the way you gave this story the detail it needed and didn't overpower the story with ...
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: Trying To Save Her
I Like it, mainly because I love drama and tragedy. Hmm idk, but I thought that this was an interesting piece mainly for the dark processing that this poem took, ...
Mar 2, 2013
