Never done this before, but oh well, here goes:
(Link to the song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBrWNbjw3RA)
Smooth Criminal Funnify attempt
As he logged onto the Internet
He saw the picture, of a Tiny Cat
It was staring at him cutely
With a caption, underneath it (Ah!)
It was underneath the table
He could see it, was unstable
"Plz, can I haz a bacon?"
And he was laughing, it was his doom.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty!
Kitty you're adorable
From your small face, To your little paws
There's another on the sidebar
Gotta click that- it's an angry Kitty
They arrived on your internet
They left funnies, on your myspace
Then you found yourself on Lolcats
And you stayed there
It was your doom
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
You've been hit by
You've been hit by
A Cute Animal
So they came onto your hard drive
There's a hundred- where there was five (Ah!)
Call your folder Kitty Nation
It's a Kitten- Occupation (Ah!)
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty!
Kitty you're adorable
From your small face, To your little paws
There's another on the sidebar
Gotta click that- it's an angry Kitty
They arrived on your internet
They left funnies, on your myspace
Then you found yourself on Lolcats
And you stayed there
It was your doom
Kitty you're adorable
So, Kitty you're adorable
You're adorable, Kitty.
You've been hit by
You've been struck by
A Cute Animal
(OK, I want everybody to get off Lolcats right now!)
(Extreme guitar fiddley)
Aaow!
Kitty you're adorable
From your small face, To your little paws (Ah!)
There's another on the sidebar
Gotta click that- it's an angry Kitty
They arrived on your internet
They left funnies, on your myspace
Then you found yourself on Lolcats
And you stayed there
It was your doom (Kitty!)
Kitty you're adorable
From your small face, To your little paws
There's another on the sidebar
Gotta click that- it's an angry Kitty
They arrived on your internet
They left funnies, on your myspace
Then you found yourself on Lolcats
And you stayed there
It was your doom (Kitty!)
AAOW!
BLAH! It's me Jay!
Lol.
ACTIVATE UNICORN POWERS!
I Loved This!
There that's all I have to say.
OMJesus! I was laughing' almost until I died! And then I memorized the lyrics and sang it to my cat!
Kk, that's my review/comment thingy.... yeah.
Stay Awesome!
And don't forget to smile, it keeps the demons away.
-Jay.xx.
Thank you
This is really cute... A lot of repetition but maybe that's what you intended? This was really catchy though, plus I love cats. Perhaps you could use some variation though. Otherwise, it was very cute and unique.
Was with the (so) In the repetition up there.
Why the (it was your doom).
Why did you repeat that poem up there.
A bit to much repetition but it was cut kitty.
Keep writing.
Interesting name tho.
I love this! It made me laugh as I was reading it. A song about cats is so unique. I'm a little confused as to if you're implying they are viruses or not, though? I'm not sure what Lolcats is but it sounds pretty interesting.
Your work is so unique! Not about love like most of the songs. Not about a broken heart, or the pain caused by another. Yours is cheerful.
You're gonna go far if you keep it up!
Reviewed.
RedApril29th.
Search "i can haz cheezburger". It's generally cited as one of the first internet memes to break into mainstream culture, it's literally just pictures of cats.
Thanks a lot by the way
omg this is perfect! :') i enjoyed it greatly, singing the 'smooth criminal' melody to the lyrics. it made me smile. cat's are my life. thank you for sharing this lovely parody and brightening my day xx
Haha thanks a lot, I have two of them so I had a lot of research to work with