ANADIR

Ok. I'm probably just as confused as you are. This was really discrpitive, but, are you with the hymn of the Republic, or fighting it? You were really good with ...

Excuse any grammar errors? That's a large hope... lol. Sure. Lets take a look at this. So, The plan of the story seems to be awesome! I love how you ...

Blue Team Here! I never really wrote poetry until just recently where I wrote my first poem, so don't expect this to be really accurate. If I get something wrong, ...

o.o I dont really know how i can compliment this. As Blackwood said, your rhyming is pretty much perfect. You should probably put the break lines in, since without them ...

Its great to see more thirteen old writers out there! (like me) You writing style is actually better than I would expect for people our age, but lots of people ...

This looks like a great start for a book, but there were a few slight problems. First, You seemed to start out of the blue. What are the lost ones? ...

simply amazing. Is this your first book? No, it cant be, the writing is much too good. This is simply awe striking. I haven't read the first to parts of ...

This is an awesome short story! but there were a few things on it that i think you can improve. 1. I would like if you intrucuded the characters a ...

I thought your ideas was great, and the way you show them to get across, especially the one about the dog ready to pounce on anyone. It would have been ...

...that was amazing. One of the best short stories I have read in a while. your grammar was amazing, and your story flowed well. I could feel the narrators feelings, ...

Awesome ending! The chat wasn't rushed, and you had a nice cliffhanger. I also loved the characters, (Sherlock :D). Also, you gave them depth, for example, "Very well." the receptionist ...

AMAZING start! the very beginning got my blood boiling for more. also, you started with a great hooker. i hope you post more of this book, because it seems it ...

AMAZING start! the very beginning got my blood boiling for more. also, you started with a great hooker. i hope you post more of this book, because it seems it ...

another amazing chapter! i didn't notice many problems, but here are the few that i noticed. the man who was threatening rosa seemed...weird. i don't really know how to say ...

Awesome start! there were few, if any grammatical errors, and your writing style was amazing. after reading the first few sentences, I found myself drawn in, and loved it immediately. ...