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Re: Ghosted
Hello Dracula, i enjoyed reading your story. it is very well thought out and provides great imagery. i loved the imagery you used to describe Aristo when he was having ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: Various benefits of reading books
Hello Aksh123, I really like your essay. I wholly agree with what you wrote. I, as I'm sure you do too, enjoy reading as you gain a whole new perspective ...
May 25, 2016 -
Re: Faded Memories/Cracked Self
Hello TrevonRewrite, your story is a fascinating take on reality versus dreams. I enjoyed your insight (or rather the character's) on sometimes questioning if we are truly awake or if ...
May 25, 2016 -
Re: Essay for Lions
Hi Gymnast2801, this was a fascinating read. I learned some new facts about lions today. For example, something that I did not know was that they were endangered. I like ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Miss Fortune
Hello outvaders, I'm going to begin by saying that this story has an interesting concept. However, it is a bit confusing. For instance, is Fate literally fate or is she ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Fight Like Hell
Hello zsmith, this was an interesting story. Some parts of it actually reminded me of a movie named John Dies at the End. I'd recommend it if you haven't seen ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: Untitled (Possibly: A Twisted Scale)
Hello Dracula, I absolutely enjoyed this story. I could feel the tension between the prince and the dragon as I read. The juxtaposition of both the prince and dragon was ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: Music
Hello IcantRemember, I thoroughly enjoy your poem. As a musician and music lover, this resonates with me a lot. the overall tone and theme of the poem is great. There ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: Party anthem
Hi Shubham, this is an interesting poem. It was very short but, it did give off a party vibe. There were a few grammatical errors. Such as " Let's go ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: All That Glitters Is Not Gold
Hello Anarchywolf, the word choice you used was very good. All the descriptions you used very interesting. A couple of my favorite once were " Up into the shadows, she ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: Feel Good Inc/ Character Introduction
Hi mahpah, although this was a short entry, it was really good. It captured my attention from beginning to end. The imagery and word choice really captivated me. It set ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: The Masterpiece
Hi vickelmore, this was a very interesting story. I definitely did not see that ending coming. I really enjoyed the imagery and tone of the story. It really helped create ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: The True Value to a Thesis
Wow! That was very well written. I could feel the anguish that the narrator was feeling. It is also very relatable in the way that the narrator dreaded having to ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: Gone Too Fast
Hello Keepwriting, I want to start off by saying that the poem is very touching. It is very bittersweet for a parent to watch their children grow up. However, I ...
Apr 25, 2016 -
Re: Compassionate Royalty
Wow! I definitely not see that ending coming. I thought that the story was going in a complete different direction. I honestly thought that maybe the character Szan was going ...
Apr 25, 2016
