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First off, I have to agree with Iggy, the format is not right. But what the heck, it's funny. I know I've pretty much already reviewed this for you, (but ...

Like I said for the last chapter, it's going a little fast. There's just not much detail there. I'll expound on it a little and give you some suggestions this ...

First off, I am thoroughly enjoying the story. It's fun, the characters seem interesting, the dialogue isn't drab and boring. But this chapter was really, really fast, especially the part ...

This chapter was as good as the first, but a little funny. Your last sentence, "And that's exactly what happened." Brilliant in its simplicity. It sounds like the end of ...

Well, this was definitely intriguing. Dark and mysterious is always a good way to start out a book, but that means your readers are going to have high expectations. Your ...

First thing I thought of when I read this was the movie "Penelope." Not that it's relevant to anything but, I thought of it :D Your poem is very short ...

I will be frank, this isn't written very well, and I wasn't intrigued or that interested. But when I got to the bottom, I realized that I was just being ...

Lol, this was awesome. So short, so simple, but a lot of bang. This would go great as a cheesy pickup line. Not much to say about it, as there's ...

This story was quite interesting and fun to read. I like that you framed up Death to be an old man, as this is much more realistic and intriguing than ...

Very interesting. I usually don't read or review things that have strong language in them, but, though this one definitely fits that description, I was intrigued by the style and ...

First off, I like the poem. The word "acerbic" is one I've never heard, and I know a lot of words, so good job on that. I love getting to ...

"·I realize I am not writing in complete sentences. This is because and when I wish to convey feeling over meaning." While this didn't make sense itself, but I understand, ...

This poem was classic. I've read a lot of other stuff similar to this, and I remember a specific poem that was virtually the same, but that doesn't really matter ...

Wow, this was awesome! You give it such a whimsical feel, yet there's the underlying and very prevalent mystery that you bring out in the last stanza. "Hawaiian breezes, umbrella ...

The poem befits the title and description very well. You've done a great job here of really, vividly painting these images of hate and despair in my mind. I can ...