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Very thought evoking. "If only the world could be healed with ‘if only’. I don’t know where I stand anymore." If only those words were true! Your short has a ...

Very good. I love dark mysteries, and that's exactly what this brings to mind. The first paragraph is probably my favorite, "She grabbed her black fedora to stop it from ...

Wow, this is truly beautiful. I can picture the little girl, cradling the little lizard. The lizard was a great choice, since most people wouldn't consider it cute or worth ...

This poem definitely has a "quirky side." But I guess it's supposed to. I have never actually heard of a Shape Poem before, so this is my first at even ...

It's not a bad poem, honestly, but it sounds to much like a modern pop-country song, which has been used far to many times. It just keeps repeating itself, and ...

First of all, I like the whole premise of this poem. It's so sweet, and really embodies the concept of Valentine's Day, which isn't to get a girlfriend. I liked ...

I was transported directly to a beautiful Garden of Eden. The words you've chosen aren't fancy, by any means, but they fit just right with the feel of the poem ...

I love playing in the snow! The story brought back fond memories, so I instantly liked it. It doesn't have a French feel to it, but that doesn't matter all ...

This second installment has me intrigued. When Rosie shows up and takes Alfred to the cathedral to live with all of the other kids, I thought that was a great, ...

First off, I have to laugh. Not at the book, but at one of my own. I started a new series a few weeks ago. They are sci-fi action, and ...

I have to agree with athoughttookmyfancy. It's not a bad attempt, honestly, but there's virtually no description throughout the whole thing. The words you use are very basic, so it ...

Lol, this is definitely my mother, except we call it the stare. The second she starts, your skin crawls and you suddenly find yourself wishing to do all of her ...

Great work, I must say. I love that it rhymes, but the lines aren't all the same length of syllables, so when you read it it's not like listening to ...

Definitely a romance. I love the feel it has. It goes perfectly with those great movies about writers in the coffee shop, which is probably what you were going for. ...

"Fingers crawling, carving Names of long lost lovers Into pale porcelain." I love the imagery that this brings to mind, dark and gloomy, memories of the past that come back ...