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Re: Manga manuscript
I enjoyed this page. Although it consists of only one section and doesn't provide much information about the larger story, it efficiently establishes character through visual comedy. Vince comes throu
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Re: World of Souls - Prologue
I enjoyed this read. Since this is far back and well established, I will make use of your discussion questions. 1) What was your initial reaction to the prologue? This ...
Sep 18 -
Re: Myrddin Custos: An Egg in Iwao's Spine
I enjoyed this read. I haven’t delved into much fantasy since my Narnia days, so I approached this with relatively little familiarity with the genre. The prologue presents a delightful ...
Sep 18 -
Re: Splatters
I really enjoyed this poem. It resonated with me: the feeling of conceptual lethologica, of having far more ideas than I seem to have language for. The poem captures this ...
Sep 16 -
Re: The evidence
I enjoyed the concept. The parents' dismissal adds a frustrating quality to the scene, which aligns well with the premise. However, the dialogue often feels as though it is explaining ...
Sep 11 -
Re: The Wladyslaws of Przasnysz - Short Story
Despite the cringe reeking from your note, I quite enjoyed this. I wouldn’t classify it as a serious literary work by your current standards, and I completely understand why the ...
Sep 11 -
Re: The Doll Chronicles
I enjoyed this. The concept of a cognizant doll is immediately captivating, and I think the point of view is an especially strong choice. I enjoy that the narrator is ...
Sep 10 -
Re: On the Edge
I enjoyed this. What I find most compelling about this piece is the sense of indebtedness, which becomes increasingly complicated throughout the piece. His suffering has become entangled with morality
Sep 9 -
Re: lowly
I really enjoyed this piece. The opening stanza is absolutely brilliant. The movement of the poem is executed excellently, transitioning from the outward to the inward, and then to the ...
Sep 9 -
Re: Rot | Echoes Between Sky and Stone
I really enjoyed this. The first word, being such an unusual one as "holdsman," immediately caught my attention. I misread the word as the surname "Holzman," a Germanic name meaning ...
Sep 9 -
Re: Oikeiôsis
I enjoyed this. The opening instantly reminded me of Osamu Dazai's No Longer Human , with the profound sense of alienation being a major theme throughout the story. If you ...
Sep 8 -
Re: Knock Knock
I enjoyed this poem. Since I am less familiar with poetry than with prose, I apologize for any misunderstandings in my critiques. Essentially, please take my words with a grain ...
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