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Note: manga reads right to left :)
I enjoyed this page. Although it consists of only one section and doesn't provide much information about the larger story, it efficiently establishes character through visual comedy. Vince comes through as very expressive, particularly through their shocked expression and the elongated profanity. "That one boy" conveys a lot of characterization without him saying a word. His cool expression, hairstyle, and jewelry give him a distinct aesthetic.
Visually, I appreciate how the panels gradually become more exaggerated as Vince's reaction escalates. The prominent "WHAT?" and the isolated curse make the final panic apparent. Since this is a rough draft, some elements may change once the page is cleaned up, but the expressions and comedic timing are already very readable. Even without much context, I can tell that Vince is likely to be an entertaining character to follow.
Thank you for this preview.