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ah, I have the opposite, I always have to follow a strict rhyme scheme. To be honest, I don't really think it made that much of a difference to the ...

for some reason this didn't post as a review, even though I'm sure it's enough characters, sorry about that!

Hey! I really liked this poem. I thought that is flowed very well and had some really nice imagery! The rhyme scheme was a little inconsistent, for example in stanza ...

thank you :-) means a lot

ahh thank you so much! honestly this has made my day :-)

thank you for the review! And for the criticisms! I will take them into account!

thank you so much :-)

thank you! :-)

though we are re-doing the vocals today so it'll sound a lot different

me and my friend, yeah :-)

thank you very much! i will change all those little things, thanks for pointing them out!

thank you so much! and thank you for the feedback! I think one of my weaknesses in writing is always drawing it out too much, as i usually have too ...

I always get that struggle with poetry, finding other words that rhyme XD

thank you so much :-) i'm sat in a boring lesson right now and this made me smile so much

thank you for the review :-) it means a lot. The only reason i used swearing was because this was originally going to be the start of a longer story, ...