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ahh no problem! I tend to have the same problem with long sentences myself :-)

Thank you for the review! I tried to hint at the fact that Spike is not mentally stable, that he has schizophrenia or something like that; he heard the trees ...

thank you so much! And don't worry about sounding harsh; everyone needs a critic!

Thank you so much! Honestly it means a lot to have your opinion on this :-) Hopefully I can expand on the story more when I get round to it!

oh, and with the thing about the parentheses, I'll try to explain: Basically, it's meant to be read out loud, and it's something you'd say in a different tone of ...

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Thank you for the review! Hopefully I will get round to writing some sort of conclusion to This one day aha

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ahh thank you for the review! Yeah I love studying Macbeth too!

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thank you! and for the suggestions, it really helps!

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Thank you! The costume line was referring to the previous line about wolverine but it is a little random!