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hey there! I'm gonna review this but I don't have much constructive criticism as the piece is so short! I love poetry like this, because it could mean anything - ...

Hi there! I thought this was a really interesting poem, and it left me with so many questions! For me, it kind of felt like some otherworldly being or God/Goddess ...

Hi there! You can call me Green, and i'm here to review this first part of your story. :-) A soft wind blew North across the town of Bloomington. On ...

Hi there! You can call me Green, and I'm here to review this first chapter of your story :-) Wind rustled the sakura trees into a swaying serenade, depositing petals ...

Hi there! I'm Green and I'm here to offer a review on your poem. Firstly, as someone who has anxiety, I could really relate to this poem. You captured feelings ...

Hi there, I'm Green and I'm here for a quick review. You must forgive me, but I haven't reviewed poetry in a while so this might be a bit of ...

Hi there, i decided to help you by translating this into English since that is the main language used on this site, so that more of us can read it! ...

Hi there! I'm going to quickly review your poem :-) Firstly, I really loved the imagery you create within this poem - emotional imagery really. I could really feel and ...

Hi there! I'm che, or green, and I'm here to give a quick review! First, I loved this! I might be bias because i also love Freddie Mercury aha. I ...

Hi there! Quick review from me :-) I really love how the story is being told - I love a good first person narrative as it feels so personal and ...

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Hi there! I really enjoyed this chapter. You seem to have a knack for creating really realistic dialogue, paired with some great personalities! The dynamic between Judy and Edith is ...

Hi there! You probably saw that I review a later chapter, and I was really enjoying it so I decided to read the whole thing from the beginning. I'll try ...

Hey there! I saw that this is one of the oldest things in the greenroom at the moment and decided to help you out :-) I haven't read the previous ...

Hey there! So this is my 150th review! And I'm glad I decided to review this for my 150th because I really enjoyed it. There was a HUGE improvement in ...