4revgreen

Lonely in my chamber with them. Them? I love this short opening; it really threw me straight into the poem! The word chamber is so interesting; there are a few ...

I loved obsession, so when I saw this poem I knew I had to review it. I think you captured Nikki's 'obsessed' version very well. The poem feels very quick-paced, ...

Alex's Review Template inspired by @4revgreen's poem- ' '. Prompt ' a YWS poem ' credit also goes to her! Hello, I'm reviewing using @AlexWrites ' template today! I see ...

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Hi Aster! I wanted to check out your work, and this blew me away as the first piece you've posted on here! This is a lovely piece that deals in ...

FINALLY BACK! Let's just jump right into it Eventually, I handed JP the book with instructions on the Italian words so he could look over the remaining Spirit Warriors. Ha, ...

Hi! I loved this poem, and thought it was a really interesting view of writer's block or something similar. Let's get into the review: Words. They float around me Like ...

Hi Bug! I'm back for the next chapter. My mystery continues, and Alex must head off to class whilst still worried about her dream. Lucy is absent, and I wish ...

Hey Bug! I reviewed the other chapter and realised I had never reviewed the first one, so let's get to it! This is a nice opening chapter, and it sets ...

For a first poem, this is very strong work! The emotion shines through, and that's the most important bit for me. I think there is work to be done, as ...

wow, I have listened to the song a few times now and your voice is absolutely insane. Like, it is the most beautiful voice I have heard in a long ...

Hi! This is a nice and neat little poem; let's get into my observations They don't understand - They won't understand This is so true. I remember being in a ...

Hi Dom! Not sure how I missed that you posted some flash fiction, but I am excited to review it! I think the feelings presented in this piece are very ...

Hi! This is a really beautiful poem, and i'm here to review it today! i anticipate solitude ‎it used to be ‎an old friend of mine ‎we were good mates ...

Helllooo. So, we have a little interlude. It's shorter and honestly on my first read I didn't spot anything that I would change or want to edit, which is great, ...