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Firstly, I love the drawings of all the characters! That's really gonna help me picture them all as I read more chapters. It's especially unique how you incorporated them as ...

Hello! I enjoyed this poem, which details a poetic retelling of a key scene from The Odyssey. You capture the essence of the story well, with Eurymachus on his deathbed ...

This is a very sweet poem paying homage to your late grandfather. He sounds like a lovely man, and I hope you are doing okay

The imagery in this poem is just so tenderly beautiful. The jasmine, the warm scent, sneaking a peek at Victoria's Secret, fingertips, cardamom, ginger, cutting the hand, falling, grey hair; ...

oo you are blessing us with two pieces on this fine day, amazing! This is a very good narrative poem. You tell the story of Casper in a way that ...

WAIT, NOT MY HEART JUMPING BECAUSE YOU USED MY REAL-LIFE NAME HERE!! I have to read the previous part now! I really liked this short piece. It sets up lots ...

Hello! What a lovely little essay you have written here. I like the overall message of it, and I think you are right in what you are saying. We definitely ...

Hi! I really enjoyed your poem. Silly me didn't read the description, and I just saw you described this as a foetus poem, so I think some of my analysis ...

I haven't read the previous chapter yet; my apologies! But this still set me up quite well to understand the story. There is a lot of really great worldbuilding here, ...

Hi! I really loved this poem. Here I am thinking I was a fold in your brain Ugh, this is just such a good way to describe the feeling of ...

I just had to jump on and review this as soon as I saw you had posted this! Please beware I am on my break at work and not got ...

Hi, back again. Trying to get one chapter in every evening before I go to bed. I enjoyed the humour in this one, and the idea that this is playing ...

First of all, I really love the use of punctuation in this poem. It really separates the lines and makes the reader pause and think about what they have read, ...

Amias emerged from the circus tent, sharp teeth piercing his tongue. His stomach was screaming at him, the emptiness eating away, like a snake eating its own tail. He had ...

Hi again! I'm excited to read another story from your world. The best parts: You subvert traditional storytelling by using the lore of East Asian dragons instead of the typical ...