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Hey Kafka, Here I am, as requested! I, too, needed a dictionary next to me to read this. Your writing style overall is absolutely incredible. I still had many questions ...

Hey PaulClover, Thank you for asking me to review this. This is some of the best science fiction that I've read on this website so far, it really is. I ...

Hey Katrain, As requested, here I am. Wow. I'm being totally honest here, I havn't come across a poem this good in a long time. This was really unique, and ...

I love this! My favorite part of this poem was "Craving Fame as Well as Infamy". That's so true. I love your tone when you write this. It's so self-justifying ...

Hey Persephoneia, Thanks for giving me something to read! Your nervous sweat presses the smell into the air, rusty after all this time. I can almost see it hanging overhead ...

Hey Upile, I'm here as requested. I really liked this. There was a lot of emotion and it was very realistic. The one thing about this poem that confuses me ...

Hey CreativeXPressions, Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, and you can call me Alex. I feel like you wrote this in a rush. It's a very ...

Hey Upile, When I read all this, there are moments when I want to tell you that some of this is the most cliche poetry I've ever read, but then ...

Hey Kafka, So here I am to review your second chapter. Fires are slow to die. Even when their feast has been reduced to sickly black blocks of char, one ...

Hey Writer? I really liked this because I felt that (unlike most rhyming poetry similar to this) it had a good flow to it (sorry Kafka, have to disagree with ...

I'm sorry to hear this. I know what you mean with your "creek" analogy (I'm that "smart kid" too). You just have to make sure that you give life everything ...

Hey Megs, I've been planning to read your novel for the longest time, so I'm glad I finally got to it. I agree with other reviewers of this chapter that ...

Hey jujubean, Honestly, I like some of your other fiction much better than this. Your style of writing this story didn't work out well at all. Friday night , Paul ...

Hey Daniel, Sometimes, I can be very critical of poetry, and this is one of those times xD. The trees have lost their green the trees have lost their leaves ...

Hey Smash, I'll give you my nit-picks first, and then give you my overall opinion of your work. Hester Borone Wow. What a name! blew long and hard on her ...